How could you... (Etheree)

Wow MIchael! What a stunningly visual write-I was blown away at the end myself-powerful!

Michael,
What a fab etheree. I do need to try this form. You vocab within this piece really come through as painful and powerful. I though oh a poem about being hurt but my goodness that last line what a real kick in the teeth. The image of your bleeding heart and skin puncturing is a sad one.
I guess many people can relate to this (though I hope it wasn't literal for you) as I can.

All the best, Em

Brilliant poem Mr Darcy, I love the formatting and style in which you describe what's happening. The poem is very well written and shows a level traits you express in your writing.

I'm a big fan.

This is an awful episode that happens so often..
To me it would feel like they just ripped my soul out and threw it in a garbage... Im wondering, how come you didnt center this poem?

From the hilarity of the two I've just read to this explosive and gut wrenching piece.
We can all imagine this scenario - some don't have to imagine I guess - but the language used here really brings the horrors of the scenario to life. "...my skin punctured, ruptured, flesh splattering outwards....."
Well done Michael - this is vivid, to say the least. All the best.