Comments : A Dream Denied

  • 9 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Well done, Cassie. I very much like the layout of this sad piece. Well written.
    All the best
    Ben

  • 9 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    Cassie, this is such a powerful write, I always love how descriptive your writing is and how the imagery just leaps off the screen, it's funny I'm such a book geek I looooove how books feel and smell etc and sometimes when I read poems on here I always find certain poems I would just love to read off a page, this is one of those poems, a sad write but it is wonderfully written you really control the reader when you write, not just in this piece but in ALL your writing, I have been a bit lacking in comments recently which I will remedy shortly.

    Take care Nursy.

  • 9 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    I came back for another read.....this write is so damn good!