Comments : The One that got Away

  • 9 years ago

    by Joey Matthews

    There's a nice use of imagery thought this poem, I really enjoyed reading it.

    "We had connected with such ease.
    It seems, I was just a tree
    struck by lightning;"

    This is the perfect example, great stuff!

    Keep 'em coming!

  • 9 years ago

    by Mimi

    Perfect ending