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by Shruti
I love this poem sooo much. It's really sweet. But have a look at the 8th line. I think it should be 'till' instead of 'til'. Overall, it's very good. Very well done. 5/5 & welcome to P&Q.
by Maricris
Thank you for your comment Shruti, It really needs editing. I appreciate your concern.