Comments : I'll Remember You

  • 9 years ago

    by Shruti

    I love this poem sooo much. It's really sweet.
    But have a look at the 8th line. I think it should be 'till' instead of 'til'.
    Overall, it's very good.
    Very well done.
    5/5
    & welcome to P&Q.

    • 9 years ago

      by Maricris

      Thank you for your comment Shruti, It really needs editing. I appreciate your concern.