NOM NOM NOM

by Alaskan Husky   Sep 24, 2015


This reality we stumble thru
blinded with our hands askew
quick to crack a joke so ready to
poke fun at the broke BUT...
why?

when this
magic took over the air waves
magic is what they embraced so with
magic we shall unveil the gift of
magic's face.

please shut these voices off
they malingering in my mind,
oppressive
knocking out
all thoughts I don't even wanna find

keep them in the dark
dark keep the light apart
apart from my broken heart
heart full of disease
disease infested
I said please
please don't leave me clean
clean out the infection within
my virus to your mouth so eat!

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  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    The title intrigued me but I must admit when I first started reading the poem I though why what title until I got to the end, nicely linked.

    Your flow is good and as Darren said the loop poetry at the end was good.

    Em

  • 8 years ago

    by Darren

    Clever to throw a little bit of loop poetry in there at the end.

    love all the magic as well

    This is one of those poems I enjoy where we take the stuffy poetry form and rules book and flush it down the bog.

    The title was interesting, linked nicely at the end.

    good poem

    I enjoyed reading this.

    • 8 years ago

      by Alaskan Husky

      I really appreciate the time you took to comment...thank you!

  • 9 years ago

    by Dancing Rivers

    Brilliant!

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