Rania,
This is a stunning piece and the language and imagery in that second stanza thoroughly impressed me ".......the coughing sky" - brilliant.
All the very best,
Ben

Nananom.....bdbdjgotntbsgdufjf......that is all. Wonderful.

Oh my.. ran .. i love this so much.
and i want to nominate it *cries * why am i so late to check this *wails*