Ghostly (haiku)
by Larry Chamberlin Sep 28, 2015
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9 years ago
by Meena Krish
Within these three lines you have drawn an eerie atmosphere leaving the reader with a scary presence then end it with a "silly me its just a cat!". You have done well with this haiku and it read well too...nice one!
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9 years ago
The actual experience was rather eerie as well, since we were also being stalked by skunks
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9 years ago
by Mr. Darcy
Hello Larry,
Nice Haiku...
Ghostly presents, a suggested form enough to poke the paranoia in all of us. As the form moves it reveals itself a smudge, still eerie, but still what is it?
In true Haiku fashion, a revealed surprise... a cat.
Well done an enjoyable read.
Take care,
Michael
