Comments : Ghostly (haiku)

  • 9 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Hello Larry,

    Nice Haiku...

    Ghostly presents, a suggested form enough to poke the paranoia in all of us. As the form moves it reveals itself a smudge, still eerie, but still what is it?
    In true Haiku fashion, a revealed surprise... a cat.

    Well done an enjoyable read.

    Take care,

    Michael

  • 9 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Within these three lines you have drawn an eerie atmosphere leaving the reader with a scary presence then end it with a "silly me its just a cat!". You have done well with this haiku and it read well too...nice one!

    • 9 years ago

      by Larry Chamberlin

      The actual experience was rather eerie as well, since we were also being stalked by skunks