by J Nair Sep 28, 2015
category :
Life, society /
about society
Late in the afternoon when the sun was mellowing a bit, |
by Shruti
This is so good! A dark feeling comes when I read it. |
by Ben Pickard
As Saffie says, a very clever use of story-telling in a poem format. I enjoyed this. Well written and welcome! |
by J Nair
Thank you Ben. Your earlier comment motivated me to post this one. |
by Baby Rainbow
Wow, impressive talent you have to combine a very detailed story into a poem format, and make it flow so well. Very informative with description and held a good interest throughout for your reader. Well done and welcome to the club! |
by J Nair
Thank you for the warm welcome, really appreciate the good word. |