Wow, impressive talent you have to combine a very detailed story into a poem format, and make it flow so well. Very informative with description and held a good interest throughout for your reader. Well done and welcome to the club!

As Saffie says, a very clever use of story-telling in a poem format. I enjoyed this. Well written and welcome!
All the best,
Ben

This is so good! A dark feeling comes when I read it.
"Both man and beast seemed to be in a state of snooze,"
^ love this line.
A really wonderful work.