What a wonderful write, dripping in wonderful imagery. Well done indeed!
All the very best,
Ben

A beautifully sad poem filled with imagery one can feel
while it was been read. I liked the links between nature and human emotions..it flowed and walked hand in hand..lovely write.

Very interesting title, the wording and imagination is a spot-on.

The structure and style of expression is very unique. Although utterly sad, the poem is very beautiful in such a rare sense.

That nature-humanitarian metaphor bond reflected creativity at its best.

Well done