The First Time

"I am glad I didn't write about my first time in twenty lines, it may have been rude! lol"

hahahahaha U r killing me bro!!!

Im sorry lets get back to your poem... If I have to write about my first poem I would be so embarrassed! Lets just say it wasnt read worthy.
I truly enjoyed this read, brought me back so much memories.. Thank you so much for posting this jewel!!! ~smiles~

I am glad I didn't write about my first time in twenty lines, it may have been rude! lol

This is great. The first attempt at a poem. The fear of rejection and failure. What if it is awful? What if I am ridiculed? Maybe the question should be: What if we never tried we would never know of have excellent writers like you...

Well done,

Take care,

Michael

I enjoyed reading this piece.

My favorite lines are:

Pen met paper within a rush of
half formed images and words
that swirled and clashed like
thunder in a sunny sky.

Melikes it.

"fed them to another virgin sheet" - love that line Cassie, and another delicately written, descriptive and accomplished piece.