Comments : The First Time

  • 9 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    "fed them to another virgin sheet" - love that line Cassie, and another delicately written, descriptive and accomplished piece.

  • 9 years ago

    by Everlasting

    I enjoyed reading this piece.

    My favorite lines are:

    Pen met paper within a rush of
    half formed images and words
    that swirled and clashed like
    thunder in a sunny sky.

    Melikes it.

  • 9 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    I am glad I didn't write about my first time in twenty lines, it may have been rude! lol

    This is great. The first attempt at a poem. The fear of rejection and failure. What if it is awful? What if I am ridiculed? Maybe the question should be: What if we never tried we would never know of have excellent writers like you...

    Well done,

    Take care,

    Michael

  • 9 years ago

    by Koan

    "I am glad I didn't write about my first time in twenty lines, it may have been rude! lol"

    hahahahaha U r killing me bro!!!

    Im sorry lets get back to your poem... If I have to write about my first poem I would be so embarrassed! Lets just say it wasnt read worthy.
    I truly enjoyed this read, brought me back so much memories.. Thank you so much for posting this jewel!!! ~smiles~