Comments : Have you ever wondered..?

  • 9 years ago

    by Koan

    Oh this is brilliant!!! Finally someone is trying to improvise and brake out from the oh so tired everyday form of poetry!! I used to do this but than I got all these weird replies hahaha
    I love it!

    • 9 years ago

      by Mr. Darcy

      I know what you mean, if we all write the same nothing will ever change. Words are like clay and should be molded in any way...
      V i s u a l and vocal to name but two...

      thanks for recognising the effort.

  • 9 years ago

    by Ingrid

    I know the answer, Michael,

    they run onto the

    P
    A
    P
    E
    R

    of the P O E T

    as we are the V O I C E

    of man-kind

    True?

    :

    Once released they set us

    F R E E

  • 9 years ago

    by Ingrid

    I know the answer, Michael,

    they run onto the

    P
    A
    P
    E
    R

    of the P O E T

    as we are the V O I C E

    of man-kind

    True?

    :

    Once released they set us

    F R E E

    (((HUGS)))

  • 9 years ago

    by PETER EDWARDS

    Nice poem Michael, albeit I did drop in to your poems to make me laugh, but find instead a sad poem about crying! Aarrrgghhhaaaaaaa!
    No matter, my visit was well worthwhile, to find yet another thoughtful classic penned by one of my favourite poets.
    Simply magic Michael, simply magic!

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    Michael, right now I am wondering this very thing... Where are they going because they seem to be forming a puddle on my top lol but once evaporated where are these bad boys off to??

    Great imagery and form
    Em