Comments : Melting snow

  • 9 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Firstly, welcome to P&Q.
    What a lovely first piece from you with a rhyme scheme I love. You've created some lovely imager in this piece; well done and all the best,
    Ben

  • 9 years ago

    by Everlasting

    Music to my ears! I like it.

    The rhymes are well done. Welcome to PnQ.

  • 9 years ago

    by Shruti

    Good rhythm throughout. A smooth flow too. Like it.