by Kaytrien Oct 4, 2015
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
When you look at the horizon, with someone who loves and cares, it changes the time and moment, whether it is here or there. You look at that line, that stays in one place, then the sun will go down, at a very slow pace. As you smile and laugh as the jokes soon all fade, and the fun that was created, and the joy that was then made. I love that warm smile, that he gives me each day, I love those 3 words that he loves to say. " I love you" is why i'm here today, he kept me going, and here I want to stay. |
by Ben Pickard
What a wonderful poem with a really good flow and honestly written. The only thing I might suggest would be to lay it out in proper stanzas - it would make it more pleasing to the eye and more inviting. |
by Kaytrien
Thanks! Also, thanks for the feedback! |