Comments : Sunrise And Sunset

  • 9 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    What a wonderful poem with a really good flow and honestly written. The only thing I might suggest would be to lay it out in proper stanzas - it would make it more pleasing to the eye and more inviting.
    Otherwise, this is great. Well done and all the best,
    Ben

    • 9 years ago

      by Kaytrien

      Thanks! Also, thanks for the feedback!