Ibis

Wow...just blown away by how beautifully you captured the essence of life in reference to the bird. Love it.

This is awesome. And that means a lot coming from a guy that lives in a country where Ibises are practically a plague. They've taken over nearly every tree and haven't left the windshield or paint of any car unscathed. But I digress.

Great job with this one. Incredibly well thought out and built strong and solid :)

Extremely inspiring. The poem has life embedded within it. It's like a thriller scene.

The idea of Ibis's soul and traits reflected thought these few lines is very touching, and leaves the reader with thoughts on bravery and strength.

Your closing line must be my favorite, it was very strong and full of impact.

Sometimes we find missing human traits in the most fragile creatures.

Loved this poem. Well done and thanks for sharing.

Very beautiful and inspirational! This is the first time I've heard of this bird and after reading this, I hope it won't be the last :)

"sounds erupt from the belly of the sky. "
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I absolutely adore this line!

This reminds me the poem of Russian poet and writer Maxim Gorky "The song of the Stormy Petrel".
One can find its English translation in Wikipedia.