This is a stunning and very relatable write for a lot of people, I would imagine. I love the repetition of Abyss it shall be Abyss it shall be - very moving.
Well written and a great read - I would nominate this if I had some votes left!
All the very best,
Ben

Wonderful write! Love those lines about the whistle of the train, someone whispered spirituality heals pain-excellant! We are alike in that you tell a story with rhyme, I love that all the time, keep up your great work, I judged it and I'm no jerk!

Nominated
Ken