Comments : Suddenly So!

  • 9 years ago

    by J Nair

    Wow !Enjoyed reading your poem.

    Great opening-
    Your truth always happened at wrong time
    You were guilty of telling lies to death

    nice imagery:
    *jumping up and down in a stinky swamp,
    one day you were caught behind the epigram
    encysted in perversity
    * Some of the days
    burned like dry wood