Altared Plans (ContraRictameter)

Sad poetry, striking this week.
The title itself, brought the Marriage theme directly to my head. And the the blend of words, expressing one's self in such flippy wording way "word of your.." "and yet- never alone" "never alone"-"married"

It's just an amazing form that was written in a great way. The tune of sadness and woefulness and somewhat that sense of blame, is just touching and raw like fresh meat.

Well done! Nailed the form with great emotions.

This really is a very clever little piece Larry. The way the first line comes back round on itself at the end is heightened enormously by the wonderful format you've created.
This is a sad tale indeed and one that moved me. I will nominate this tomorrow when my votes are renewed.
All the very best,
Ben

Ahhh my heart, cant take this. The sadness in here comes in a different tone. What a well written poem.

I love it!