Comments : Weeping beneath the willow

  • 9 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    What a lovely nature poem, Hazel, made better for me by what we have been discussing.
    "If only she could teach me to love as she does, to accept the souls in my life regardless of their blemishes no judgement."

    ^^^^^^^^
    Wouldn't it be lovely indeed if we could all be as calm, forgiving and graceful as the willow, or any other part of nature?
    By the way, the last six lines of this piece were a stunning way to finish.
    All the best, Hazel,
    Ben

    • 9 years ago

      by Dancing Rivers

      Awww thanks Bennie, glad you enjoyed it, time for some joy methinks

  • 9 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    Nominated all freaking day long!!

    This is a wonderful nature piece and my most fav of your Writes to date.

    Beautifully chosen words and format and the imagery here is excellent.

    The other Ben lol x