Previously published by me ( as all other my English poetry ) on other sites under the name princeAlexander / princealexander
First publication on 05/24/2011
www.postpoems.org/authors/princealexander/poem/898574
Second publication on 05/26/2011
http://www.world-poems.net/modules/publisher/article.php?storyid=2157

Hello,

A nice poem which holds its mystery well...

Halloween and the act of knocking on doors donned in masks and announcing the question:Trick or Treat.

Well done.

Michael

A great poem with a lovely, flowing rhyme scheme that was a pleasure to read.
I love the message that night reveals in us what the daytime conceals. The idea that - in the dark - people can be revealed more clearly. Clever.
All the very best
Ben

Great concept Alex. Enjoyed the poem.

'But may be really night reveals
The truth of us, which day conceals ?'

Words Wonderfully portrayed the fact, that our souls the reality might be coming awake in the night when the body is at rest. It takes the nights darkness to bring out the reality of our truth which hides in the days stark light.

Thank you.
Jay

Love this poem It brings to light the secrets most of us may carry in the dark parts of our hearts! Good work! Love the flow, the meter & Rhyme You have talent!