This is a touching poem, it gets to your heart for the ones that you have lost in life and it really hurts like no tomorrow when we lose a friend that means the most to us. I'm sorry I don't know the exact feeling that you have since we all go through our pain in different ways. Great job and a great tribute to a friend.

I do have one tiny thing that got to me, please go back and do the grammar some of the words in the poem didn't match with the time placing it would make it even more beautiful.

With all the best in mind for your future happiness

- Moria