by CRAFTY KEN Oct 13, 2015
category :
Life, society /
other
Finding my brother Bob |
by J Nair
Moving story. |
by CRAFTY KEN
Thanks JNair, I like your work also and plan to comment. |
by Ben Pickard
Ken, what a wonderful write - I love your use of internal rhyme here. It keeps the reader's attention right on the excellent and interesting story you are telling. I love the line "his fist was as big as Momma's old frying pan" - excellent. |
by CRAFTY KEN
Thanks Ben. I had been thinking of those in order to survive have to work in mines. How terrible it is when miners are trapped and the race to save them |