Comments : Finding my brother Bob

  • 9 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Ken, what a wonderful write - I love your use of internal rhyme here. It keeps the reader's attention right on the excellent and interesting story you are telling. I love the line "his fist was as big as Momma's old frying pan" - excellent.
    I am out of votes this week but will nominate come Monday if I still can - I love a poem with a story executed so well.
    All the best Ken
    Ben

    • 9 years ago

      by CRAFTY KEN

      Thanks Ben. I had been thinking of those in order to survive have to work in mines. How terrible it is when miners are trapped and the race to save them
      begins, men, machinery all combine, their hearts longing to save their brothers trapped in the mine.
      I pray that the working conditions will improve greatly for all miners around the world.

      Ken

  • 9 years ago

    by J Nair

    Moving story.
    Thank you Ken.

    • 9 years ago

      by CRAFTY KEN

      Thanks JNair, I like your work also and plan to comment.

      Ken