'bout to do a spin down top
on another box
of pop rocks
cuz i don't care if they rot my teeth
excuse me I was blinking in your face
and you should've seen the disgrace
associated with being
my newest lover
Let's go hide under the cover
of a new moon
and pretend the giant stars
cannot see our tear streaked faces
lemme take you to the places
where only giants breed
Hi and welcome to the site.
This really is a unique and exciting first piece that I enjoyed thoroughly. Well done - read three times and was surprised by it with each going over.
All the best and keep writing,
Ben