Poor Hugh (Senryu)

by Ingrid   Oct 19, 2015


Watch the old boy drool.
His house stacked with candy, yet
no teeth left to eat.

http://www.google.nl/url?sa=t&rct=j&q=&esrc=s&source=web&cd=2&cad=rja&uact=8&ved=0CCgQFjABahUKEwjnmqv_ls7IAhWmj3IKHeXOC7A&url=http%3A%2F%2Fwww.mirror.co.uk%2Fnews%2Freal-life-stories%2Finside-playboy-mansion-its-like-4915348&usg=AFQjCNH8gN5Sr9h0a2Sbw4b1FOGp4Drc1Q

(Sorry for the long link, but I was informed the one I had here before did not work anymore.)

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  • 8 years ago

    by IdTakeABulletForYou

    I think the person who down voted your poem probably did so because they thought the link was an eyesore. Honestly, it is a bit of one, but the words and the article go so well together... it's quite honestly beautiful. This was supposed to be a funny poem, but before it made me laugh it made me think... If you purchase so much of a product, eventually you'll tire of it. That is the key to happiness and maintenance is moderation.

    I can't express enough how impeccable this piece is.

    Wonderful write,
    5/5
    IdTakeABulletForYou

  • 9 years ago

    by GB

    Ingrid,

    You do awesome job with this section my dear, it's not easy at All. I guess age doesn't matter when it it comes to such candies hahahahah, love the teeth part!!!!

    Glad to see you posting :)

    • 9 years ago

      by Ingrid

      Thank you my dear Samia, your words always mean so much to me:) xx

  • 9 years ago

    by PETER EDWARDS

    I split myself laughing at this short but great poem!
    Well done Ingrid. I will be smiling all day thinking on this one!!

  • 9 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Hello Ingrid,

    this is certainly a, laugh out loud poem. I mean how do you hammer a nail in without a hammer!

    I am glad I checked the link out as it made me go, ah yes, I see!

    A poet without a voice to speak or pen to write of a world stepped in wonder.

    In one word my dear Ingrid 'Inspirational'

    Take care,

    (((hugs))) xx

    Michael

    • 9 years ago

      by Ingrid

      Thank you guys for your thoughtful comments:)

      Men like Hugh, who treat women like disposable objects of lust make a mockery out of the sacred relationship between a man and a woman.

      (((hugs)))

  • 9 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Ingrid, this is excellent and really did make me laugh! At least he's still got the gumption to give it a go, lol!
    All the very best,
    Ben
    ps I will nominate later when I have some votes to do so!

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