Love lines

by Princealexander   Oct 21, 2015


Your eyes are tender but your look has tease.
You've been created to beckon, seduce and please.
You are an earthly creature, but I would sell for you my soul,
And would betray Almighty God, not being afraid of paying toll.
My actions are no longer ruled and judged by any reason,
For Love lies high above religion, and worth the blasphemy for treason.

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  • 9 years ago

    by PETER EDWARDS

    Hi Prince Alexander! (what a great name!)

    I like your poem a lot! This is a good piece of writing!

    Please forgive me, I added some suggested small changes just to make it flow a little better. Hope you approve.

    'Your eyes are tender but your look has tease.
    You've been created to beckon, to beckon and please.
    You are an earthly creature, but I would sell for you my soul,
    And would betray Almighty God, no fear of paying a toll.
    My actions are no longer ruled and judged by any reason,
    For Love lies high above religion, and worth the blasphemy for treason.'

    • 9 years ago

      by Princealexander

      Hi Peter.
      I appreciate your kind words and will think about your suggestions.
      Obviously my pseudonym assumes more than I really am ... :-)
      Cheers,
      AP

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