Comments : Outside my house [ Rondeau ]

  • 9 years ago

    by Cindy

    Another excellent Rondeau you have penned.
    Your words have painted a picture for the minds eye..a beautiful scene of sunny skies, butterflies and a playful kitten rolling and jumping in the green grass.

    Good job!
    Take care Cindy

  • 9 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Great write - I love the rhyme scheme here.

  • 9 years ago

    by alka mendiratta

    Felt like playing hide and seek with the kitten:)

  • 9 years ago

    by Koan

    Such a lovely poem!!! Enjoyed the read!!!!