Why i reason so

by Justin   Oct 23, 2015


I look into,
then see the entirety,

why the pause ,
for a thought expressed,
no emotion finessed ,
,

and yet,
do we always do,
i can only trust,
my feelings exist,
cannot you.

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  • 9 years ago

    by Greeter

    I agree with the above comment, shouldn't the last part "cannot you"? End with a question mark?

    I just ask because it seems the entire poem focuses on using punctuation, other than that, I think this is thought provoking.

  • 9 years ago

    by Eithne

    If the last line is a question to someone , shouldn't there be an interrogation sign?
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    Correct me if I am wrong.
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    It's simple and really nice. Good one.
    5/5

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