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by Eithne
If the last line is a question to someone , shouldn't there be an interrogation sign? . . Correct me if I am wrong. . It's simple and really nice. Good one. 5/5
by Greeter
I agree with the above comment, shouldn't the last part "cannot you"? End with a question mark? I just ask because it seems the entire poem focuses on using punctuation, other than that, I think this is thought provoking.