Life-Pain

by Jyoti Rawat   Oct 24, 2015


Our life is not pain
Sometimes our memories become pain,
Our expectation become pain,
Our half desires become pain,
Our loss become pain,

and

We start to think,
Our life is pain,

But life is not pain..........................

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  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    A very well expressed piece.

    Our lives to begin with are filled with a purity and then things happen to cause us pain but life itself is not pain just the circumstances within life.

    Em

  • 9 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    So very well expressed dear....we do generally end up concluding that life is pain but its basically self raised expectations which lead to pain.

    Very well written.

    all the best & take care

  • 9 years ago

    by alka mendiratta

    So true and well said Jyoti .
    Keep penning :)

  • 9 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Very true Jyoti, life itself is not pain, its the situation and the circumstances, expectations, wants and loss which makes life painful. Well penned!

    Just one thing, this sentence:

    Our lost become pain,

    ^^I think you mean loss..so our loss become pain.

  • 9 years ago

    by Cindy

    Jyoti
    Nice expressions of the pain of everyday living.
    Take care Cindy

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