Narrow Minded Society

by Sarwar Ferrarri   Oct 27, 2015


I Live in A NarrowMinded Society

And I Refuse to Accept That

Girls should be Sent to School

Instead I Strongly want That

They Should Remain Just At Home

I Dont want to See That

Every Girl Is Goin To Get Education

And I Imagine A Society Where

They are Just House Wives

I Do Not Concede That

They Should Be Allowed To Bridge the Gap of Gender Inequality

It is Worth the Money n Time To Make Em Study

Is Nothing, But A Lie

In The End They Ruin all Hopes n Dreams of Parents

Its Going To Be So Evident That

They Do Not Deserve To Be Teachers n Doctors. ..

Belongs to A Strong Line Of Idiots who say that

Girls too Deserve as Much As Boys Do...

Yes I Feel it So Strongly

Untill You Choose To Reverse It....

Read This Text From Bottom To Up

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  • 9 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Well said!! I applaud and share this same very view and honestly our society is narrow minded!

    Well done in writing this and it sounds out a strong message...like Greeter says, try not to make each letter in a word a capital.

    Welcome to the site!

  • 9 years ago

    by Cindy

    Very strong and thought provoking piece. Your views are voiced very loudly.
    Good job!
    Welcome to the site.
    Take care Cindy

  • 9 years ago

    by Koan

    You have created very unique piece here, Bravo!!! I have never thought of it!

    ~~~~~~clapping loud~~~~~~~

    I think Greeter has a point. Also no short cuts like "n" spell it out "and" and please use the punctuation rules, it helps the reader fallow the rhythm of your breath, sort of speak!!

  • 9 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Hello and welcome to P&Q

    The main reason I like this piece is this. It delivers two powerful statements in a clever way and this results in the message becoming magnified.

    Well done.

    Michael

    • 9 years ago

      by Sarwar Ferrarri

      Thank you so much for encouragement... i am new writer...and i want to share my views with this world

  • 9 years ago

    by Greeter

    That's pretty cool. If I read it from bottom up, the idea changes. The way you wrote the poem is creative. One can reverse our thoughts. It's saddnening that some people actually believe that woman should remain at home and not study. Education is important to everyone. Everyone should have an equal opportunity to learn.

    Nice piece.

    The only small problem that I have is the capitalization of every single letter in a word as if each line were a title. Unless that was done with a purpose. Other than that, I enjoyed the read.

    Welcome to Poems and Quotes.

    • 9 years ago

      by Sarwar Ferrarri

      Thanks Mr. Greeter.... and i shall consider your valuable suggestion

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