Comments : Life unlived

  • 9 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    What a sad endnote you have left there, Busy. Those dastardly demons really are buggers, aren't they.
    From the poem's point, well written with a powerful lesson for anyone reading. Make sure the choices you make don't leave you with regrets you may never be able to shed.
    All the very best and take care
    Ben

  • 9 years ago

    by PETER EDWARDS

    Hang on in there friend, I can only guess as to what you have gone through, albeit your poem I think does say it all. Well written piece of work. Liked it.

  • 9 years ago

    by DarkLight

    Ben thanks.
    Peter Edward, am doing my best.
    Thanks.