Comments : Crossover

  • 9 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Hello,

    Personally a cup of Earl Gray performs the same feat for me.

    I love the language you use and the dreamy quality you manage to infuse.

    'now dusting begins
    within a tranquil memory,
    covering limbs of skeletal
    shadows. '
    ^
    Eyes trying to open, everything appearing dusty. Reality and dreamscape are merged for a while. Like a second skin, a shadow, it will soon be left beneath the pillow until bedtime.

    Well done. I'm off to bed now! lol

    Take care,

    Michael

  • 9 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    An almost hypnotic piece and - as ever - wonderfully written.

  • 9 years ago

    by Effusive

    A beauty.