Tears of the Garden

by Larry Chamberlin & Mr. Darcy   Oct 29, 2015


Sorcerous arcs slashed the vast night
craven blades, as cruel as their light;
spawned in a single haunting scream,
bolts of terror burning rich dreams,
cremated old crone witch to blight.

Villagers struggle to comprehend
who lost this fight and failed to defend.
Packed their troubles and goods onto carts,
look askance at their fields dead and charred.

Tales of this evil fire leaked out,
like chilling mists from lands without;
from father to son and some folks,
'round fires and hearths they sickly spoke,
by roads that skirt this field of coke.

For the few that ventured to this place,
all they saw was her malicious face
charred in mystery to twisted trunk:
paradise once grew but now it's sunk.

One day a single tendril sprouts
no man or beast to see or vouch
that where was singed and blistered earth
now life of green has promised worth
the value and hope of rebirth.

Ploughman commences to clear the land
where that blackened apple tree did stand.
As blade turned earth he let out a cry,
stomach exploded and then he died.

His horse reared up and raced away,
found later stressed, a broken gray.
They never found its master though;
beneath that tree he'd sunk below,
his life-blood drained to make it grow.

As the villages grew into towns
took land to build the new homes around.
This barren field was blackened no more
still men ignored the rich orchard floor.

One day a lad researched his clan
and found a ploughman's unclaimed land;
he read the myths in song and verse
but 'spite such tosh he spurned the curse;
sure sun and rain would fill his purse.

Tree shades rippled like waves in the wind;
patches of light dropped down to ascend
branches whip back raised up in salute:
defending the garden's sacred fruit.

That spot, the only naked ground,
was where they found his plough laid down,
though the body could not be found;
he sensed a presence, not unkind
as though spirits were realigned.

He surveyed his brash undertaking:
saw countless blood apples hung breaking
limbs that were tired of their load but fresh.
He'd harvest this unrefined white flesh.

He set his ladder into place
and then worked his rhythm and pace
plucked apples, wiping intently,
laid them down ever so gently
nestled in flannel, steeped in grace.

So his inspired mind found destiny
in apple-pressed tears sweet as honey
to make good the ploughman's sacrifice
whose blood was taken to break the geis.

Cider aged, fermenting mellow,
apple tears smooth as a cello,
tasting time beneath harvest moon,
oaken table with cloth festooned,
gathered his neighbors and fellows.

Shadows of tree limbs crept across grass,
he hammered the bung and filled each glass
made opening toast, this stalwart lad
who salvaged bounty from trees thought bad.

With glasses filled, the youth cried: "Please,
to ploughman, whose blood fed these trees,
who, dying, lives within this earth
let's celebrate, a shared rebirth!"
They drank all 'round, down to the lees.

A strange fullness descended on them;
melancholy mood; by light of glim
they came to that field, where it began,
found on that tree: smile of the ploughman.

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  • 9 years ago

    by PETER EDWARDS

    Nice work Larry!
    A great story turned into a great poem!
    An interesting read from start to finish that kept me enthralled.
    Epic!

    • 9 years ago

      by Larry Chamberlin

      Thanks, Peter, but half of the praise needs to go to Michael.

  • 9 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Well done, Gentlemen, this is a fantastic RHYMING poem, lol. I never thought I'd see the day from two of the best non-rhyming poets on this site!
    This truly is an epic piece, beautifully written and a seamless collaboration indeed. This has gone straight into my favourites and I will read it over and over again.
    I will nominate this on Monday.
    All the very best,
    Ben

  • 9 years ago

    by Cindy

    Good job on your collaboration. Tells a wonderful story. Keeps the reader engrossed from beginning to end.
    Take care Cindy

  • 9 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Hello Larry,

    I am glad you have posted this. It seems an age ago now when those first arcs scorched the land. lol

    This is a story that spans generations and has a dark sinister cord running through it. And what we can all thank you for is a happy ending. The moral I learned from this is that: life has a dark and a light side and sometimes its best to allow the light that is there to shine.

    Thank you Larry for this valuable experience.

    Take care,

    Michael

    • 9 years ago

      by Larry Chamberlin

      It appears we both learned, Michael. I loved that you could take my corny connections between characters and give them a logical reworking that also remained clear for the reader. Also, your insistence on tragedy at the outset & middle made the poem.

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