Sometimes...

I like this because it may be raw but it has been written perfectly. There's no need for rhythm all the time in my opinion and I am jot going to tell you self harm isn't he answer because some of us when in self destruct mode will do anything whether it be with a knife, alcohol or other stuff and we don't need people to think they understand but we need understanding; if that makes sense.

Em

I love this. The only thing that threw me off, was the fact that flesh and dead didn't rhyme, neither did away and place, so the flow was a little off. But otherwise, just loved it. 5/5

Let me tell you, self-harm is not the answer even if it feels like it in the moment. It will only cause more pain and will not solve the hurt deep down. You can make it through this, through this pain. There is hope and help.

My heart goes out to you. Please don't be afraid to reach out, sometimes our mind can trap us and we can be tempted to do anything to end the pain or seemingly hopelessness of our situation. But there's always hope as my mom often reminds me.

Take care.

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Kota
A dark heartfelt poem you have written here.
I hope your life so far isn't as bad as your feelings that you express in your write?
Your poem was powerful, made me sit up and take notice. Every word you wrote seemed to shout out a rage of sorts against the world.
I hope that you don't self harm, life will get better believe me. Just stay with it, ok?
You'll see.
A great write Kota. Enjoyed your poem!