Comments : Love scares me.

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    I wish it would be as easy as trying to walk on water" - I love this line.
    A thoughtfully written piece, Busy, brimming with an undercurrent of sadness.
    All the best
    Ben

  • 8 years ago

    by Lune de ma vie

    This was so powerful, so relating and emotional. I loved the words and message and meaning behind this poem. Metaphorically this is one of the most heart wrenching poems I have read. Keep it up, stay strong and love with all your heart even though it is scary. I feel you there.

    • 8 years ago

      by DarkLight

      Thanks.... it means a lot.