Comments : Monology

  • 9 years ago

    by zabetha

    Nice job.

  • 9 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    Spelling in last line: "hundfred" should be "hundred"

    The emotion in this is raw and honest. I feel the plea, the love and loss pouring from this write.

    Keep writing.

    • 9 years ago

      by NOOR

      Thanks for commenting my poem. This all is very real to me. I try to find someone who was very special to me. I didn't write anything for this site for years and I feel great need to write. I couldn't imagine he had miss me all these years and now I am anxious if I may reach him ever again.

  • 9 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Hello Noor,

    It us clear you have a talent to write your emotions poetically. I realise your mother tongue is not English, but that is what makes your words expressed so special.

    I hope you find your lost poet.

    Take care,

    Michael

    • 9 years ago

      by NOOR

      Hello Michael. :-) Long time no talk. I hope your son is okay.. Thanks for commenting my poems. :-)

  • 9 years ago

    by PETER EDWARDS

    I like your poem, Noor.
    You express your sadness very well here, and your poem is a delight to read.
    I hope you find your Love again.

    • 9 years ago

      by NOOR

      Hello Peter, thanks for your comment. It is very sad that people like us met but then let something special go.. I don't know how many soulmate we have but I am sure now he was my soulmate.. I try to find him and find out is he still there for me..