Hello Noor,

this is a powerful write. I love the fact you have used a God to symbolise the emotion.

Tonight I call you
God of Thunder
Make a storm inside me
^
To purge an evil sometimes we need violence. But sometimes we need kindness too. A bit of both maybe?

Remove everything which blocking my Love
^
Noor, pop the word 'is' between 'which' and 'blocking'

Purify my Soul from dark matter
Clear me to an empty page
^
I like the book simile, like starting a new chapter.

So my Love can re-write me again
Throw your axe to my Igrorance and pride
Remove all the stains of my heart
I need to be forgiven
So Thor, come to my heart tonight
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Seeking forgiveness in the hope that a new chapter can start anew. My advice is: forgive yourself so that you can move on. We are not Gods and we have to be kind to ourselves and learn to love what we have good and bad.

Well done Noor,

It is lovely to have you back.

Take care,

Michael ((hugs))

God has forgiven us for all our sins. Not only we need to learn how to forgive but we also need to forgive ourselves. Forgive and letting go and moving forward. Treat yourself with kindness. Great write