Comments : Outcome.

  • 9 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    You said in your message to me that this was complicated. I disagree. I understand this poem and can relate, perhaps to a lesser extent.
    What use of anything that is meant to be when we hide from it and are scared of its outcome? Be it love or fate?
    I love the last full stanza: who cares even if the reader does understand? The meaning is all now lost on the writer anyway!
    I like this a lot - it is a clever piece of writing.
    All the very best
    Ben

  • 9 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Love at times can be so strong it can hurt. We all have been hurt but it makes us stronger and the outcome is unforeseen. You have expressed your emotions very well.5/5