Really powerful write, and I like that there are so many what ifs listed, but it is actually not much to ask for, it is really small and simple things that should just be anyway!

Oh wow, this really blew me away. I was caught up in the wish for more romance from your lover. What if he just hugged me once in a while. But, then the last 3 wishes for his to stop his abuse so a family can live happily sent shivers up my spine.

I am shocked. A quality poem in my eyes is one that causes an emotional response. I hope this is fictional. I hope you are well and I hope your family are happy as you deserve to be.

Take care,

Michael

So many what if's and to have them answered is what peace is about..the yearning for normalcy and to do the simple things in life makes a bond and its home flourish. A touching write which got me from the first "what if".

I feel the emotion.