Comments : Tender the Child (tanka)

  • 9 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Larry,

    I've said this before.. You have a way with the Tanka form, and this piece packs a very powerful punch.

    Children learn from their parents. From day one, each tainted word can affect them for years to come...

    Tainted is the key word here.. This poem is a powerful piece and I'm glad you took this message and placed it within the tanka form.. A small poem with a beyond powerful message. Very nice!

    • 9 years ago

      by Larry Chamberlin

      Tainted - good word, Andrea
      I like it better than "gone with each"