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by Scott Cole Nov 7, 2015 category : Nature, environment / nature
I'm unique in design And I vary in size, My life is short lived To all watching eyes. I'm a glorious wonder From the Heavens above, If you dig my presence I'm a labor of love. I amaze and astonish Or get on your nerves, Either way that it goes You stare and observe. I'm related to water First cousins to ice, Cold to the touch And whiter than rice. I'm a menacing mess A beautiful vision, I'll rain on your parade Like nobody's business. When temperatures rise I'll make my escape, When I shrink in size And lose my shape. For I'm a Snowflake My life is a mush, As times go forward I'll turn to slush. So enjoy my wonder When I'm young at heart, Appreciate my beauty For I'm a work of art.
by Mr. Darcy
Hello Scott, great flow here and rhyme too. It was a pleasure to read as you one by one gave this reader a clue to what the poem was about... finally the reveal was a snowflake. I must admit I didn't get it until the whiter part. A lovely poem that contains imagery of all the elements of water. Just one note, the title has a small typo. Take care, Michael
by Scott Cole
Thank you