Comments : Frozen Shards Of Glass:

  • 9 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Hello Scott,

    great flow here and rhyme too. It was a pleasure to read as you one by one gave this reader a clue to what the poem was about...

    finally the reveal was a snowflake. I must admit I didn't get it until the whiter part.

    A lovely poem that contains imagery of all the elements of water.

    Just one note, the title has a small typo.

    Take care,

    Michael