Comments : I have loved in vain.

  • 9 years ago

    by Cindy

    Paul each word you have penned cuts like a knife, into the readers heart. Your pain brings tears to my eyes. I know how long you have waited for her to return your love. You have to watch out, there are so many women in the world who will use you then spit you out. I call them "man eaters" Take care of yourself
    Love Cindy

    • 9 years ago

      by anand singh

      Thank you Cindy. She keeps leaving and coming back saying sorry, and each time I forgive her. It hurts, it does hurt. She knows that the poems I post on Facebook is about her and me yet she acts as if it's not. Take care my friend.

  • 9 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Paul,
    A very sad and moving piece that leaves the reader feeling genuine sympathy for the writer.
    "It cuts me up inside like a dull serrated knife" - powerful imagery indeed.
    Well done, take care and all the best
    Ben

  • 7 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    This is beautiful! So full of emotions.