Falling Skies

by DarkLight   Nov 9, 2015


When the first drop hit the ground

Sending soil particles flying in the air

with smell of earth filling the atmosphere

the start of new season.

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  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Well done on this Busy.
    With only four lines, you cannot afford to be wasteful and you haven't been once. Each line says something and offers wonderful imagery. I can smell that earth as the rain hits the ground!
    All the best and I hope you are well,
    Ben

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