Comments : Unexpected

  • 9 years ago

    by DarkLight

    Beautiful dreamy poem. Good art.

  • 9 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    What a lovely and thoughtful poem this is from you Hazel. I love the unforced rhyme - the whole piece reads wonderfully.
    Nominated.
    All the best.

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    This is a lovely poem of how things can go when you follow your dreams or even if you don't and things take a turn for the better x

  • 8 years ago

    by Anesu Joseph Chihambakwe

    "Now only joy is found here
    as the shattered dreams disappear
    you see that joy was always in you" powerful.