Comments : II: Sol Solis

  • 9 years ago

    by BeautifulSoul

    Nominated!

  • 9 years ago

    by Cindy

    I found this very thought provoking...I read it a few times...and found the beauty in it.

    My muse comes to me with
    pockets full of earth and
    a smile of sunlight,
    the flower of our love
    burgeoning still
    at the edge of oblivion.

    ^^^
    This stanza each time I read it reminded me of someone who passed away.
    Great job
    Take care Cindy

  • 8 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    I'm reading this again...it really is an amazingly deep write....awesome :)